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Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2022 3:10 AM Title: Tom's Story

I don't know if you'll read this Duggernaut, but i just want you to know i still enjoy this story. I hope you are well.

Reviewer: giantess007 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2021 1:54 PM Title: Tom's Story

More giantess Stories : giantessstories.com

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2018 2:24 PM Title: Tom's Story

I hope you'll come back to these characters ,especially since Tom's sis fixed the machine.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2017 2:39 AM Title: Tom's Story

@Carycomic,

You forgot that the main character is Tom. Lol.

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For the ending of this story, the sly grin on Tess's face doesn't seem so sinister to me. Should've ended with Tess running a diagnostic test and then a knock on her door. Tess opens it and gasps. A voice asks, "do I hear a familiar sound in there?" Tess, hesitating to answer allows the figure to enter her room. They walk toward the device as it's making noise. "Well, I think we are going to have a great time together, now wont we?" The smile of Miss Harwood couldn't be described as she gazed upon the shrinking machine ready to be used on its next victim.
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If this were a movie, she would say "I think I know who is next..." and then Miss Harwood winks at the audience.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2017 2:51 PM Title: Tom's Story

Carycomic with an unnecessary 4 reviews to reach the 1000 mark. Lol!

Author's Response:

Super grateful to both of you and others who invested in this story to make it what it is now!

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2017 2:52 PM Title: Tom's Story

I hope we get to see Miss Addison again before this is all over. I really wish you had used her more.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2017 10:20 AM Title: Tom's Story

Duggernaut!

Happy 2 year anniversary with this story!

Reviewer: Serj1801 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2017 2:53 AM Title: Tom's Story

"How do you say 'Deranged psycho' in Russian?"

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m6;l0;k9;k2;l5;m1;m0;k2;n3;, m5;l6;l2;l5;m1;m0;k2;n3;, k3;l6;l3;nl5;k2;n3; l5;k2; k4;l9;n2; k5;l6;l3;l6;k4;m1;, l9;l3;km0;kk4;m6;k2;n3; l9; l2;k2;m0;m1;m6;kl2;, m5;l0;l2;k2;l5;m1;m0;k2;n3;, k6;l6;l3;k3;k2;l5;m1;m0;k2;n3;, l7;l6;km3;k2;k4;m6;k2;n3; l2;lmm6;kl1; :)

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shizanutaya, choknutaya, bolnaya na vsyu golovu, sletevshaya s katushek, chikanutaya, dolbanutaya, poekhavshaya kryshey



Author's Response:

Thanks for the insight Serj801! :)

Reviewer: shadowrust Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2017 4:58 PM Title: Tom's Story

How has this story been going on for so long?



Author's Response:

It's the oddest thing...

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2017 10:55 PM Title: Tom's Story

@pixl8ed

Replace 'smurf' with 'tasteless, impatient coprophiliac' and you'd be right on the money.

@Duggernaut

You put dedication, time, thought, and research into your work. Of course it will receive a wide reception. 



Author's Response:

I would like to think I have a fairly developed vocabulary but am pleased to say I have learned a new word. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2017 5:45 PM Title: Tom's Story

I heard the name mentioned in a recent re-run of HUNT FOR RED OCTOBER. It thus occurred to me that, if Russian naval subs were based there (to periscopically spy on the Norwegians and other NATO allies in northern Europe during the Cold War), the Russian Mob might be based there, as well. Conducting industrial espionage (among other felonies) for the highest bidders among unscrupulous corporations.

Author's Response:

Thank you for clarifying and now get what you going for.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2017 2:11 AM Title: Tom's Story

@pete445,

Um, my fantasies.

Author's Response:

Darn tootin'

Reviewer: vgiv Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2017 12:20 AM Title: Tom's Story

Close to 1000 reviews. The only story on this site to do so was one of the Titan stories before they were deleted. Exile I think.

 



Author's Response:

I am still humbled by the traffic this story has seemed to generate. I would never have thought 1000 reviews possible, nor 1.1 million reads.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2017 11:08 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Goblo,

Please. You said the same thing from Duggernaut's other story: Property of Omega Pi. Nothing wrong with short chapters if it's updated consistently often.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2017 7:42 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Carycomic,

I am finally second in most reviews on this site. You're next. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2017 9:08 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Ancient relic,

Haha, not yet. I felt like Duggernaut captured my imagination and my fantasy in this story. I just don't want it to end.

Author's Response:

Not yet pal o' mine, not yet  :)

Reviewer: Donnert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2017 3:20 PM Title: Tom's Story

After such a fantastic story, I do feel like it is time to retire this one and work on more masterpieces (The Ad maybe?). Perhaps combine the two endings? I would like to see Aunt Dona take out Tom in a sexy, devilish way. This way the story gets closure and we get some more awesome storyline. The shrinking reversal process could backfire and Tom could find himself very miniscule. It would be very easy to become lost in an orifice, sealed in a toy of some sort, or woven into a pair of someones panties. Whatever you decide, thank you for providing us with constant updates and excellent content. 



Author's Response:

Thaks for sharing your thoughts. for the moment it would appear some haven't quite reached their limit of tom, so it will continue for the time being.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2017 7:07 AM Title: Tom's Story

As for "Carycomic-like puns?" Mr. Speedy should be glad chapter 21 wasn't entitled "Nothing Could Be Finer Than To Be In Karolina!"

Author's Response:

Nicely played sir! I defer to your genius

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2017 9:00 PM Title: Tom's Story

Hey Duggernaut, what do you think of my fanfiction in my previous review? :)

Author's Response:

Sorry bud been tied up with some real world stuff. I love danfiction and am both amazed and humbled that people have engaged the characters . I happen to know one of your favorites is Miss Harwood. Your depiction of her expresses her dominance which we saw in spades with her interaction with Tom. With a peeper I am reminded of botched when one of the robbers wanted to watch a girl go to the bathroom so she shrunk him and put him in the toilet to watch. Similar in your tale. You want to see?  Get up in there! The Katie Cassidy relationship was fun because of the how the two interacted together and played with Tom. I should write a story about the two of them on a road trip with the shrink ray! Thanks for writing.  FYI the girls are in the dorm so  a teacher could possibly stroll by...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2017 9:10 PM Title: Tom's Story

900 reviews! Let's go!

You know we want 1000!

Best story ever! Long live Tom!

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