Reviewer: Alman01 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 9:26 AM Title: Hm. I’ve never actually tried it before.

Well you certainly weren't kidding when you said this'd be a gorey chapter. Holy geez :P
Can't say vore and gore is my thing, however I gotta say I do like this concept you've writen up so far about there being an agency which deals with matters related to shrink crimes and this Claire abusing a few flaws in the agency's system.
It's a good setting and interesting to see what will hapen to the remaining three..

However I think you could probably do much more with this concept. Maybe midway through have a chapter that works to explore or highlight more about the agency processes, something like Claire going through a typical day at the office etc.

Also you're doing well to show how the shrunken victims get treated, however what about the criminals responsible for shrinking them? Do they ever receive any retribution at Claire's or the agency's hands? ;) 

Author's Response: Sorry that vore and gore aren't exactly your thing. Not to worry, I like variety and there will be plenty of giantess content floating around this story. Thanks for the review. Also, yes, I was actually planning exactly what you had asked: a typical day at the office. I want the readers to see how Claire lives her life and maybe even become connected to Claire. Yes, I do plan to do a lot more with the setting I've created. I love me some hot action, but I also love a good story. As for the criminals you speak of, Claire is essentially one of those criminals. But I bet we can throw in some morality twists to spice things up. Claire might not be the only one dealing with tinies.