Reviewer: SilentStep Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2016 9:26 PM Title: The Machine

Please don't listen to the people who dislike male giants. I personally wait for stories that involve male giants. Love it so far!

Author's Response:

Don't worry! I personally like male giants as well, and the only reason there hasn't been any new growth for Matt was that I was trying to finish up the girls' fun; after that, its Matt's turn.

Reviewer: Jthm22 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2015 6:23 AM Title: The Machine

Another great story so far, sir!

 

I like how open the possibilities are. The characters already have some development from your other stories so it makes their personalities more well known and therefore more enjoyable to me. Even if they're not the exact same characters and it's more of another universe. It allows you to build up what you already have, while also having the option to make personality changes if you wanted. 

I really enjoyed the Riley growth scene while I wish it was a little slower,  more gradual growth.  she is an ambitious character and it reflects her personality. I'd like it if, on her walk home, she ran into some other young friends/classmates/neighbors maybe getting bullied by some other more developed people and she wants to help and introduces them to the machine. Maybe she convinces Matt and Katie to go out with their more adult bodies and she starts growing all the local girls. 

There is also the question of Melissa and how she will react to all of this. She might have her own friends to grow. Maybe she has a boyfriend that oggles katie/riley  to much and Melissa gets jealous and shrinks him/grows herself. 

I really like the idea of the machine falling to Riley's hands and for her to start growing anyone as she pleases. 

I'm not really the creative type, but you asked for some suggestions. So there's my two cents. I think you're a great writer and looking back at your body of work it's easy to see you're continuing to improve all the time.  Great stories like yours are hard to come by. Cheers! 

Reviewer: Mechamini Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2015 6:26 AM Title: The Machine

A good way to start off your story, it had a bit of a conventional beginning, but it was blunt enough to keep the reader through the whole thing. I think the fact that the sister will be returning leaves room for other giantess possibilities! The capsule was well thought out and thorough in its explanation, however it seemed too abrupt and unexplained how that package made it to the door.

All in all, you did a good job at captivating us and left the door open. I appreciate how you allowed us to provide suggestions, I hope the boy gets shrunken below his regular height and maybe she experiments on crushing him to justify the explanation. Who knows if she will become evil or not? ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, but I already stated that the two main characters won't shrink below their regular heights, and either of them being evil just won't happen. I may have at some point a boy who gets shrunken, but not really crushed on purpose. Sorry.