Reviews For Omega: Hostage
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Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2016 8:54 PM Title: Sacrifice

Very exciting climax. I definitely didn't see Gail's death coming. It was so abrupt, it caught me offguard. Nice to get a bit of interaction between the Beta and the Omega at the end. That's quite a scale difference. Hard to even contemplate.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much. It's a little hard to write that scale, too!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2016 5:17 AM Title: Sacrifice

Gail's Death was a surprise for me! Good Chapter. But I help to understand Ben's actions with grenade belt. What was he hoping for? 



Author's Response:

He was hoping to blow up the last pillar of the new wing, so that Gail's heart monitor would fall off the roof and not activate the gas machine.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2016 8:35 PM Title: Sacrifice

WHEW!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Whew indeed.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2016 7:34 PM Title: Sacrifice

This is a fun. Gail is death. Sonja is going to get it afterwards and Alma hopefully too. Those other Alpha's too. Jenna should do the punishing. ;)

Good pacing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.

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