Reviews For Omega: Hostage
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Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2015 7:03 AM Title: Take

Good chapter! 

Unfortunately an alpha’s hand is mightier than a beta.

I got to say this is a big blow to Aegis’ perceived power if a small number of terrorists can easily take over a building with 99,000 betas inside. That Alice character, either she is a genius or used to work with Aegis at some point to know how to lock out their systems.

Another issue, this time related to the stability of the plot is Kayla. She’s stated to have godlike power; she is capable of reading minds, and manipulating size on a grand scale. What is stopping her from using her powers to easily foil these terrorists?

I’m also wondering what the fallout to this is going to be. I doubt these terrorists realize this could potentially be the catalyst to giving beta’s even more rights or making Aegis more militant in how the protect betas and prosecute alphas. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! These are all good points you raise, and the story will address them in time.

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