Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2015 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 15

Simone's built-in Geiger counter strikes again. As for Dustin's arguement with Charles over ornithological nomenclature?

Charles was half-right. I have a neighbor who used to own chickens in his backyard. So he could have farm-fresh eggs right in the heart of the suburbs! But, he eventually had to get rid of them when they started going feral. Wandering this way, and that, over every street in the neighborhood...as if they were trying to further evolve an old joke.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2015 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

Damn, John got cooked in there! It's like they baked him last night.

Elizabeth better give a bath also, not just a few drops of water. I bet he stinks too.

"Purity" - aka a virgin. Got it. Purity sounds more like a goddess term so good word choice.

I'm pretty sure Simone and Elizabeth know it's not Dustin that peeked on her. Blake is dead, they have John. Dustin is not a virgin anymore, which leaves Charles. I don't think she had any doubt that it was Charles.

I think it's funny that Simone is like "unless Dustin is not the only virgin." Well he's not anymore. Lol. Then she says, "I may have been peeped by Charles." Of course you did. You're just acting like it's not obvious.

Also, if Simone is downstairs, in the kitchen, how the heck does she know where Charles is? He could've peeked from any angle for her to sense purity. I bet there are numerous places to hide.

Good thing Dustin is with Charles. Otherwise, Simone would've had a good chance on finding him.

Now if Simone returns and her prediction on where Chalres is hiding is false, then she will either think that Charles avoided her, or likely that she will think that Dustin has helped Chalres and that's why he moved.

Man, I'm all in for Charles to become a hero in this story, but I really want to see Simone capture Charles. He thought that being stuck in Simone's underwear was horrible. I wonder if his mindset will change soon.

Dustin can try all he wants. Using all of his evasive maneuvers, there is no way that he can stop Simone from claiming her prize of Charles. It's bound to happen.

Speaking of Dustin, I wonder what happens when he gets caught. Will Simone take extra precautions on keeping Dustin trapped, or will she respect Dustin's craftiness and give him some slack? Anything can happen.

I can't wait for the next chapter!