Loving the detail! Most typical hide and seek games in stories don't even last a chapter! This is awesome!

Simone hip bumping the fridge. I love it when girls use their hip to push things. It just seems sexy to me.

If Simone and Elizabeth are checking one furniture at a time, I think the best option is to hide by one furniture and then move to another piece of furniture that they already checked. Silent and swift is the key. (Easier said than done.)

Master bedrooms are usually enormous, especially to a tiny person. I wonder if there is a hidden giant woman in the room, but the guys didn't go there. I went to this one open house, and the master bedroom was basically 3 little rooms in one. There's the actual bed room, the bath room, and then the giant walk in closet room. If this master bedroom is anything like the master bed room that I saw, then I wouldn't be surprised to see another woman hiding there.

Then again, I want Simone to find them all, becuase I can't wait to see what she does to them. Also, becuase Simone is the girl that all 4 guys were ogling when she first appeared.

(Next chapter: Dustin finds a secret hideout. The group hide as long as they can, but they need food soon. Simone puts food out in the open trying to lure them out. Will the guys get caught? Stay tuned for chapter 7!) That's my guess.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom I appreciate your feedback, and you are quite correct, this master bedroom also has a large walk in closet and attached batrhoom.