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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2015 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

Simone reminds me of this one girl I met. She had really big bright green eyes, and I thought she was part alien. Like she had a look that made you feel dazed as you met those eyes. (Another example is that girl from the movie "cowboys and aliens". I forgot her name though).

These guys are hypnotized by Simone! They don't even realize that no cell phone service is trouble! Talk about deadly seduction!

Dustin knows something is up, but his friends can't be convinced.

I like what Nonna said. "It's good, it will make you strong". Let's take a look at that phrase. It's good means that it will only good for the women, but bad for the guys. Then the strong part will probably mean that their size will be reduced but they are more durable.

Now there's that classic, "you get food, and you better like it" situation. That happens to me more often than not. I always have to exaggerate just to appease those who have offered me food. I totally feel for these guys as they lied here.

Then Simone just nonchalantly says, she can't stand it, and I just laughed as all the guys are like, "yeah, it's crap". Great diologue.

Simone reminded me of Poison Ivy at the end of the chapter. She has that "sleep tight"(but my plants will eat you) attitude.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2015 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

Nice little touches of classic atmosphere. Right down to the usage of words like "bade" and "Morpheus." Bravo!

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