[Report This]Date: January 23 2023 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoyed the story and the plot. Not exactly thrilled with the ending, but I can live with it. The suspense (though not quite to the level in 'Bang Your Head' was still quite good and I felt one of the guys could be eaten/squashed or perhaps worse at any time. Some innovation in here as well for the tinys trying to escape and I really like the 911 call idea. Well done.
Date: September 10 2018 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
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Date: August 25 2015 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
I would've called it "How to train a virgin".
Author's Response:
Like a virgin, touched for the very first itme
Date: August 24 2015 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh yeah, I was freaking out when you didn't upload within 24 hrs. Then 48 hrs later, I was wondering, "is this it?"
Well, I'm really, really glad that you are back!
Author's Response:
I had a busy weekend couldn't update as per my usual style. going to be some lean times coming up in the next few weeks too, I'll do my best - i think I have a couple stories close to wrapping up which will free me up for my others too.
Date: August 07 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Meanwhile, Dustin wakes up in a moist environment. :)
[Report This]Date: July 20 2015 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't let two guys have ALL the reviews lol. This story is one of two that I'm actively following on this site right now, and as the other one led to me creating this very account about ten minutes ago, I think it goes without saying how good I think this one is.
Author's Response:
Awesome, much appreciate that you find the writing engaging!