Wow, another story?!!! This summer is full of great stories to read; I can barely keep up. I'm reading chapters from about 10 stories each day. The more the merrier!

I agree with Nyx. You have a similar theme of powerful people getting broken down by these women. Especially when these people think that they can "conquer" these women.

This chapter reminds me of the first chapter of two of the contract, when Jack Dalton is holding two girls at gun point believing that he is in control, yet the girls have other ideas. Same with Henry. He feels powerful, until the moment he shrinks.

Also, all these "warnings" that these ladies say sound like seductive messages that attract the men even more. These guys think of it as a joke or metaphor rather than taking it literally.

Vanessa making a reappearance! Now that is great. I can't wait to see other familiar faces as well.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey Tom, yeah there is some similarity between Jack's and Henry's situation, except Henry is insane and his confidence is based on delusion while Jack is genuinely a badass. Because several of my stories are set in the same 'world', the warnings are predicated by the Covenant, but yes, it's kind of a challenge encouraging the men to step over the line and commit which gives the ladies license to play. I think this story will only be the two chapters though.