Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 9:10 PM Title: Westworld to Micro

I like the concept of the story but you have to elaborate more, here its hard to really get a feel of the characters and events going on in the chapter. 

 

Also, the structure of the story is hard to follow , maybe change the way you organise your paragraphs? 

 

If you improved the writing, I could definitely see myself following this because I do like scifi stories.