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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2015 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 5

Lily acts more like a Venus man-trap. :-(

Author's Response:

I think I kight use that exact language in my next update for the Contract!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

What! These women can change sizes?!! Or just Hilde becuase she is of a different spieces?

Hilde is smart and devious as always, picking her toys one by one.

Simone, Lily, Hilde, Serah. The whole gang is coming together.

What I learned this chapter was how young Serah is. She acts like a little girl, while Hilde acts like a 40 yr old and everyone else is in between.

So Lily has always been cruel. Men are expendable in her eyes. She must also be good at catching humans, becuase 4 is a lot. The other girls show off even one tiny, but Lily doesnt care. She doesnt brag; she just does what she wants and seems to always get what she wants.

Great stuff, and I cant wait for the next chapter!

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