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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 4

Once again, Selene and Vanessa never cease to amaze me. The way they use their bodies to use their men is incredible.

I mean, that was some good play time. Very well described.

Then the second half was with the soldiers.

I agree, Agrippa may be the only one to escape this hunt, but everyone else is dead meat.

Valerieus has no chance to escape, but I feel that he has a chance to live. Most likely a girl will pick him up, and save him until he wakes up. (No girl wants to swallow an unconscious man, right? They love the way they struggle in their throat.)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

You mean, Hilde's psychic detection of Cade's visit to her apartment? That occurred in a later chapter. The visit, itself, comprised the entirety of ch. 19.

Author's Response:

Cade had been here, in her house. A smile touched her face and she nodded approvingly. She hadn’t anticipated this move. He had taken the game to a whole other level and in so doing, he’d inadvertently cleared the articles of the Covenant, permitting her to now play with him as she wanted, no restrictions. Dropping her keys back into the purse, she walked down the hall and set the bag on the kitchen table. Closing her eyes, she allowed power to flow through her. In her mind’s eye, she could visualize the policeman’s movements through her home, like a heat signature of everywhere he roamed after he had violated her private sanctum. Following the spectral image of Cade, she traced his path, looking where he looked to see what he might have seen. She wondered how he processed hi s information, what did he perceive, interpret the elements of her long life? She knew he lingered at Agrippa’s helmet and sword.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ah! The blissful ignorance of the knocked-out-cold.

Still, if there's anyone with a good chance of CONSCIOUSLY eluding pursuit, I feel it's Agrippa the scout.

Author's Response:

Chapter 19, The Contract - Unlawful Entry. Might be an interesting re-read, :) (Agrippa)

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