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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love prequels that serve as origin stories! Bravo on using this one to tell us about Hilde

Author's Response:

Thanks Carycomic, there will be a bunch of origin stuff on Serah here as well. Find out why she is the way she is in the contract

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 3

After reading about 50 chapters from this one universe, I can't tell if there are lightbulbs lighting up inside me, or if there are knots forming in my head.

I mean, so many people!

While all these connections may be an overload to me, I finally understand that this story is where it all began. This story seems to take place before all the others.

So Hilde was once an outcast, locked in a cage? Wow! And in your other stories, she is like the most superior woman in that group. She must have done a lot of impressive things to get promoted.

Selene and Vanessa love toying with their men, so I'm excited to see what they do to them.

Clarrissa appointed Hilde. And will probably promote her too.

Ohhhhh! So Lily is Selene's sister! That's why they know each other in the "contract". Also Lily is selfish, wanting things for herself. First Jack Dalton, and now this hunt. (Technically, the hunt came before meeting Jack, I believe.)

Tanaquil and Adeline are new. They must only be teachers, I guess.

Let the hunt begin!

Author's Response:

Hi Tom. sorry I've woven all of these stories together, even I get befuddled from time to time. Hopefully by the end, everything will make sense.

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