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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2015 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

I will be definitely be tuning in to see what happens next. Great story.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks Aaron, hopfefully I can keep the story tight enough to maintain your level of interest

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

@ Tom Speedy: Vanessa's the redhead with green eyes. Selene is the sultry brunette with the violet eyes.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 2

Now, this is _my_ kind of historical gts-fiction. Devoted as much to suspense as action!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

Selene and Vanessa. Lovely Names. I couldn't really tell who was who. Was Selene the dark haired one, or was it Vanessa?

I know Selene is very playful, but they both were playful.

That double kiss must be heaven. I mean, these men thought they were gods, and to be embraced by them is definitely an honor. Flavius got lucky. All the others, not so much.

I understood this chapter much better. I even think I'm starting to keep track of these soldiers names. But then they died. So now it should be easier to keep track of the fewer remaining people.

I would love to see some more "foreplay" before a soldier gets swallowed. Perhaps, they are expendable now, but as they die one by one, these giantesses have to take their fun a little slowly.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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