Date: February 03 2023 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story thus far and well written. I'm not typically into willing vore, but I liked Flavius' episode. Also liked the nice array of personalities amongst the giantesses. The personalities of the Romans, outside of a few, were pretty bland, however.
Giving it an 8 rating, though, due to it's being incomplete.
Date: July 18 2015 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Maybe, as her first love, he still has "Agrippa" her, emotionally.
X-D
Author's Response:
Nicely played
Date: July 17 2015 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Heh! I could have sworn I didn't read that part until either ch. 20 or 21. You sure you didn't do some mischievous re-editing?
Author's Response:
I actually had to go back and find it to reference it in my response. Now the question is how did she acquire the items and why does she still have, displayed prominently no less. Hmm..
Date: July 03 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
@Carycomic, thanks!
Date: June 28 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have no idea what is going on, but it seems like another promising story.
I guess I have to be patient with this tale to understand it.
I'm curious about the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hang in there Tom, hopefully I can bring it into focus for you.
Date: June 27 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
An awesome start! I just hope you have more chapter-by-chapter reviews than I got for MTOCC.
;-)
Author's Response:
Historical fiction doesn't seem to quite captivate the way deviant angst ridden teenagers do. Hmm, go figure
Date: June 27 2015 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story. It reminds me of Gladiator and Centurion. Along these lines check out my story the Legend of Julius Marius it is similar to this one in some ways.
Author's Response:
Thanks Hank, yeah I used Centurion as my inspiration for the ambush. Your story was way more thorough and researched than this one. Very cool. Hope I can keep your interest.