Date: December 18 2015 11:40 AM Title: So it Goes...
Not that you would, BUT I still believe this could be salvaged to lead into a sequel. People go unconcious and even comatos from blood loss not to mention cloning. I could see Psyh Corp experimenting with Vera's DNA due to her somewhat reasonable personality in an effort to gain a more controllable asset only to have the memories and emotions of the old Vera/Amora bleed through. I give you A LOT of credit for at least finishing what you had open so far. Many people (and I dont say writers because it takes a certain passion) who create stories, especially in this fetish myself included begin a story only fizzle out like a shooting star before its ever completed whereas you are like a comet. Steadily burning just kinda going along. As much as I would like to attempt a different branch on this I would never be able to even compare to the literary skill and ability you brought to life in this story. I am however tempted to purchase a twelve pack of liquid inspiration and perhaps create at least ONE chapter on my smutty mc smut story since I havent given it any attention for about a year. And Gadget, Geez gadget I wish you'd get inspired again I miss your debauchery.
Author's Response:
Haha thanks. I think I'll explore more carnal themes in the next one. As for the sequel it will come but not necessarily with Vera and Ellis may only be in it in passing. Just hold on for the Epilogue!
Date: December 17 2015 6:39 AM Title: So it Goes...
Options 1 or 5 sound good to me, would love the superhero one.
Not the ending I'd have wanted but this is still a very well written story, give yourself a pat on the back for that! Eagerly anticipating whatever you've planned next!
[Report This]Date: December 17 2015 12:02 AM Title: So it Goes...
I'm glad you finished this! I'm not gonna sit here are lie about liking the ending because I didn't, to me it was foggy and surreal which I didn't like, but that was probably your intention. The point is, the story overall was excellent!
[Report This]Date: December 16 2015 11:25 PM Title: So it Goes...
This is one of the best stories I've ever read so far. I can't wait for the next story you write, which I'm hoping is a super-esque, story but even if it isn't it will probably be an amazing story!
[Report This]Date: December 16 2015 5:17 PM Title: So it Goes...
Well thank you for finishing this one. I had hoped Vera and Ellis would have somehow been able to escape together somehow but, tis what it tis.
Author's Response:
I had anticipated some people would not be totally pleased with the ending, and i understand. However, I do stand by my intended plot! I hope that this has been an enjoyable read nonetheless.
Date: December 16 2015 3:00 PM Title: So it Goes...
Option one (The Sons of Men) is a possibility, and there's lots of exploring that can be done in this universe, but you may get fed up with writing about it. Not to mention, some of the other idea are fun. Option two (The Flower and the Crow) doesn't seem too interesting to me. Option three sounds interesting and maybe you can synthesize the incomplete story Serving The Pantheon by Coolcoolcool5. Option four (Dissocia) seems cliché.
Link to Serving the Pantheon: http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=4617
Certainly, deities are little explored, at least properly. Maybe you can write religious scripture? Often the so-called goddesses people write about are poorly developed, as is the world around them.
Option five (Superhero story) could certainly work. Maybe the protagonist fights an evil arch-enemies giantess. Like how Inspector Gadget is constantly fighting Dr. Claw. I'm not suggesting the giantess should be anything like Dr. Claw of course, but her being mostly unseen, and, therefore, mysterious would be interesting. And ultimately there may be a big reveal.
Perhaps she has lots of goons/servants and she tortures/eats those who fail her (in committing crimes). Perhaps this can be a science fiction story about a huge giantess, her flagship and her minions. Maybe I can help you by creating renders to trigger your imagination? I have some nice throne room related props and other cool things that may work for an evil, criminally minded, giantess. A Dr. Claw like character could work, but I'll have to leave it up to you seeing as it'll be your story.