Date: December 02 2015 3:52 PM Title: It Makes Nothing Happen
Well that was a fun read. I'd be bitter too. Yeah, who needs to be a someone? People who crave attention are so sick.
Date: December 02 2015 11:20 AM Title: It Makes Nothing Happen
That wad one of my favorite chapters of the year on this site. I think we have all been dying to see Vera escape. To see Ellis approach her even knowing he might die was very emotionally captivating. Vera isnt a "good" person, but I feel like she will try her best to protect Ellis no matter what happens. I don't know how they will take on 3 giants though. This is going to be an explosion of action I would think it works well since your charachters have been literally pent up for so long. Sonce your story is in such a bleak dystopian world, i think Ellis and Vera simply surviving would be a very happy ending. Id like to see them together though.
Date: December 01 2015 8:17 PM Title: It Makes Nothing Happen
YEEEEEEES! UPDATES! ACTION! RESOLUTION! I'm really happy to see your still writing this. It's is a great story. To be honest, I had hoped my rather crude remarks had not dissuaded you from writing more, for which I apologize. Everytime I check this site I look for this story's updates first and, 'Saturn Seven' second. I feel like I received an early Christmas gift now that your back at it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And honestly I needed a bit of a kick in the ass last time. I have been dragging this out longer than its worth because I've been trying to fit to some weird schema I had designed for myself. I don't know, I think that with all of this in mind I can bring it to a more satisfying conclusion.
Date: December 01 2015 7:37 PM Title: It Makes Nothing Happen
Aha, they were here before! Seems they have long lives too, since millenia on our world is just a decade on theirs. I am disappointed in Vera, I really thought she'd be different but now... she isn't. Her decisions now will be crucial to the conclusion. Elois may die, Im pretty convinced of it.