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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2015 4:53 PM Title: Falling Through Again

Hah I guess all it took was some liquor for Vera to sing like a canary. Can't wait to see where this goes.

aaron

Reviewer: writer27 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2015 6:31 PM Title: Falling Through Again

Write YOUR story as you see it. Disregard the rest of us no joke. You already are changing it, I just hope you are doing so within your limits. And stop making us wait Jeeeezzzzz. NEXT CHAPTER!!!......NOW!!!!! lol

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2015 12:54 PM Title: Falling Through Again

Woah, maybe Vera being gassed with this stuff wasn't such a bad idea after all, it does make her easy to manipulate! Although I rather doubt she's gonna be happy about this if she remembers all this when he sobers up! Anyway, another great chapter from you, and this one also was a bit fanservicy too, something I've come to just accept not to get from this story...I'm pleasantly surprised.



Author's Response:

I think shying away from sexual content or at least implied sexual content was something I was really concerned about when I first wrote this. But, knowing that this is a website designed for such content I relented a bit in this chapter. Besides I think it would be natural given the situation. My main reason from keeping away from it at first was because all to often it feels unrealistic. The more I thought about it though the more I came to accept that if you have a young man spending a lot of time with an attractive young woman there will be sexual tension...even if its not explicity stated. So I'm glad you liked it, I was afraid some readers might be so surprised that it would have a negative effect on the writing as a whole. Huzzah!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2015 9:50 AM Title: Falling Through Again

All that drugged out fun ended with Vera's horrific confession. God, how many  did she drown?

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