[Report This]Date: April 09 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 15: Star of the Show
That confirms what i already guessed, that they went after Carly because it would bring less attention to the op.
Claire clearly knows that kidnapping Jack will bring complications.
Author's Response:
It will indeed, and probably even more complications than she's possibly accounted for...
[Report This]Date: April 09 2016 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 15: Star of the Show
Glad to see regular updates to this story. It seems like we will be close to a reunion between Jack and Carly, can't wait. Wonder how Sophie will fit into the mix with her being the target to get to Jack. Eager to see what's next, thanks for the chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes, we're getting close to the reunion. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: April 09 2016 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 15: Star of the Show
The fetish side of me wants Carly to claim most of them by the end of this, maybe not a full blown Julia on the hunt but a Goddess and her small coven of devoteds.
The story reader in me enjoys the building to a fine crescendo.
Author's Response:
Carly and Julia do have some similarities, though by the end of this I think people may be a little more impressed with Carly even than Julia.