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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2015 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 11: A Sock in the Closet

Carly's training worked...interesting chapter.



Author's Response:

It definitely did.

Reviewer: Orpheus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 19 2015 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 11: A Sock in the Closet

Wow, reading this chapter sent shudders down my spine. Something about the way you wrote Jack's encounter had a very eery tone to it, whether intentional or not. Especially when knee socks are usually charming to me. I'm glad it got a little warmer near the end though.

You've done a swell job in capturing how Carly's corruption lingers in Jack, even after it's been so long since his 'freedom'. I'm still rooting for him and hoping for a happy ending after all he's been though.

Great job as always.



Author's Response:

Good to hear! It was definitely meant to be eerie. Thanks for reading.

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