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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2015 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 7: Opening Up

I'm rooting for our tiny hero and his cousins here though I have a feeling our favorite bratty sister is not done yet.



Author's Response:

Not by a long shot.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 7: Opening Up

I'm liking this story so far. I've read bits and pieces of the previous stories but I think this one does a good job of working as a stand-alone story. Basically, Carly did horrible things with her shrunken brother in the past and everyone thought that he was dead, I think that much is clear. So far, I'm really liking this PTSD induced character that is struggling with his past as he tries to live his life as a shrinky. Anyway, I might go back and read the others, but I'm not too keen on incest to be honest, so I may keep away.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I've tried to write this one so that people who aren't super-familiar with the events of the last stories could follow along.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 7: Opening Up

I hope they cut her open and drip battery acid on her insides.



Author's Response:

Seems like the acid might be a little redundant after they'd cut her open!

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2015 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 7: Opening Up

Another great chapter. Not surprising that Jack doesn't want to talk about what happened before Sophie showed up to save him, or what was going to happen.

 

Also, the way Leah can't even bring herself to say Carly's name says it all about how she feels about her daughter now.



Author's Response:

Leah does not look particularly kindly on Carly at this point.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2015 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 7: Opening Up

YEAH! She's coming back! That sadistic little b-

Anyways, loved this chapter, and as always, can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Boneguard Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2015 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 7: Opening Up

Great.... Can't wait for the next chapter!!! I was expecting Jack to narrate the incident to Sophie... Was expecting some action. But this also is a good strategy... it's kinda like a break.



Author's Response:

There will be more action in the upcoming chapters.

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