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Reviewer: pkong Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2015 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 5: Chloe's Keeper

I really hope we see more Chloe from here on out. I really like her character. Simultaniously innocent and terrifying, sweet yet the most dangerous character in the story. Only she came as so close to killing Jack, yet remained completely unaware of what she was doing. I would love to see where their relationship goes from here. I imagine it would be hard for him to ever see her as anything less than scary. 



Author's Response:

Next chapter will show a little more about where Jack and Chloe stand now. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2015 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 5: Chloe's Keeper

Great chapter, i was wondering if He would confront Chloe. It also makes me wonder what Jack's Aunt's reaction to what Chloe did was, though Chloe does seem remorseful.



Author's Response:

Jack's aunt's reaction is probably fairly similar to his mom. Both have to deal with the fact that they have a pretty unbalanced daughter, though Chloe's wrongs, strange as it is, pale next to Carly's.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2015 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 5: Chloe's Keeper

Color me surprised, part of me still expected a swerve and maybe still does but a moving chapter regardless.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Jack may have similar concerns as you...

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