Date: July 14 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 4: A Prison of Her Own
Interesting chapter. I was so hoping that Jack would be given the opportunity to confront Carly. Sounds unlikely. I'm curious to see where you take her.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I wouldn't count out a confrontation just yet, though...
[Report This]Date: July 13 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 4: A Prison of Her Own
Holy fucking shit, that Spanish review. I wish I knew the language to read it. Oh well, Google Translate will do.
Anyway, I like how you're alternating chapters between the two siblings' perspectives, and am glad Jack's in safe hands for now. Will the two cross paths again, I wonder?
Also, I never got to comment on the first chapter of Hostage. What say you on the brutality levels of the work, the same tier as Love Games, or lighter?
Nice work as always.
Author's Response:
Thanks! We will see them cross paths one way or another, though not for a while yet.
The violence in Hostage won't be nearly as graphic as Love Games, nor will it contain extended torture like that one (hence why it's rated R not X). So I'd definitely say lighter, though it still has plenty of darkness.
[Report This]Date: July 12 2015 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 4: A Prison of Her Own
Claire's back! I wonder if we'll see the other shrunken folk she has captured.I hope we see June again.
And being told what to do isn't Carly's forte, so i can see Carly getting punished happening frequently.
Author's Response: We will definitely learn a bit more about what Claire's up to here. If not in this story, others in the future may shed more light on her activities (and the people she's come across). Carly is indeed going to find herself in conflict with Claire's expectations.
[Report This]Date: July 12 2015 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 4: A Prison of Her Own
Claire feels so familiar yet I can't place it...
Author's Response: Tee hee hee