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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2015 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 2: Littlest Sib

Ha, love how Carly can be manipulitive even when tiny, and I agree with AdamX, how dare that guard, lol. I think Adam and I are her only fans. Seems she will have to endure some hard times though, I would not have put together who that was who took her if you hadn't mentioned Toy Teacher, nice tie in.



Author's Response:

Haha. Carly doesn't have many fans, you're right. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mrcool Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 2: Littlest Sib

I love the turn of events and now Carly is shrunk and a prisoner. I would love to see Carly suffer the same treatment under a woman's feet like she did to her brother  



Author's Response:

Thanks! Carly is definitely in store for some experiences she won't be particularly fond of.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 2: Littlest Sib

I was correct, score one for me.

 

Also how dare that guard handle Carly in such a way, she must be dealt with.



Author's Response:

Hehe. Well, the guard definitely was dealt with in a way. Maybe karma for threatening Carly.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 2: Littlest Sib

I wish we could have seen more of the female guard having fun with Carly and punishing her. I also like that while she doesn't know Jack personally she is still disgusted by what Carly did to him.

I don't know if it's what you intended but i ended up liking her and wishing she"d give Carly a taste of her own medicine.



Author's Response:

While it won't be with the female guard, there's certainly plenty of time left in this story for Carly to get a taste of her own medicine.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 2: Littlest Sib

I get the impression that Carly doesn't blame Jack for getting shrunk, at least not completely. It seems like she mainly blames Sophie or at least that's how it seems like to me.



Author's Response:

Right. Carly doesn't place blame on Jack. At this point she views him too much as a helpless little thing that needs her to exist, so it doesn't cross her mind to blame him.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 2: Littlest Sib

I've no idea what happened but someone probably wants Carly out and free, perhaps even restored. 



Author's Response:

You're definitely partially right. Thanks for reading.

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