Reviews For Training Day
Reviewer: DCDC420 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 6:28 PM Title: Stretch
Author's Response:
Date: July 20 2015 6:28 PM Title: Stretch
I don't think you should have split this story up into chapters, but other than that I liked it. There was a bit of word repetition, but a lot better than plenty of other stories on here.
Also, I wholeheartedly approve of more giant blonde tomboys.
Author's Response:
I need to go back and re-word all of my stories someday.