[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Whoa: deja vu!
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
This chapter should be called "Betrayal".
I mean, both Theo and Clayton got caught! And handed over to their previous owners.
Wtf was Clayton doing in the tub? Was this a hint of some sexy fun that Andrea has done, or was it merely a trap so he couldn't get out?
Also, when did Grace act like she was drunk? She sounded like she just wanted sex and didn't even consider Theo's options.
Speaking of being drunk, Sophie is even worse than Hannah! She used to be the thoughtful one, and all of a sudden the tides have turned. (Wat if Hannah is caring all of a sudden?)
Lots of threesomes in your stories. Although I enjoy it, I would like to see some one on one action more.
I thought Olivia would take advantage of Ted. She did, but not the way I wanted to. Sophie is the one girl that has similar ideas that I have in mind.
Is she going to put Theo in her panties while Ted watches? Will Ted be put in there also? Who does Olivia get to play with? Ted or Clayton, or both?
Then Bryce shows up, and yeah, I agree. Three hot girls tackling me sounds great. Would I resist? Hmm. Probably not. (That's the scary part.)
Now Bryce will be Andrea's toy, and another happy ending to another side story.
Lots of stuff got skipped I think. We missed the threesome of Grace, Theo and Sophie. We missed Ted being shrunk, we missed what Andrea did with Clayton. I like the fast pace, but usually you include these details.
I want to see Sophie have fun with Theo and Ted, Andrea with Bryce, and most of all, Olivia with Clayton. I think it's time Dr. Featherstone got her revenge. :)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom,
The threesome with Sophie, Grace and Theo never happened as it was interrupted by the phone call from Olivia about Ted. Andrea put Clayton somewhere she thought he couldn't out of, the tub. Grace has a girl crush on Sophie, that's why she 'tasted' Theo, twice now and returned him to her. It's funny, the original title of the chapter was Betrayal (X2) There's some one on one coming up in Tom's Story for those characters.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
On a more serious note: I have a bad feeling Little Ted is going to wind up being "disciplined" by the virtually insatiable Hurricane Hannah.
Author's Response:
Interesting premise, like throwing a choice steak to a hungry wolf. The coterie of conspirators is expanding, it might be time for the hurricane to make landfall :)
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
This would make a great Syfy Channel movie-of-the-week! Although, Roger Corman would probably re-title it "Frankenshrinkers."
Author's Response:
Lol, or Shrinkenstein!
[Report This]Date: August 05 2015 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
Let me (wildly) guess: he's going to be shrunk to the size of a "Teddy" bear?
;-D
Author's Response:
To a tad of Ted :P, perhaps
[Report This]Date: August 05 2015 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
I was going to make a joke about "Sophie, so good!" But, that second part no longer applies, does it? LOL!
As for Olivia and Wiley the rookie fireman? I have a sneaky feeling that the expression "wrapped around her little finger" is soon going to be more than figurative in his case.
Author's Response:
Hmm, I guess only time will tell, though it may be a little transparent, :)
[Report This]Date: August 04 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
I don't know what to think of Andrea. I can't predict what she will do to Clayton. Will she sell him for money? Will she replace Bryce with Clayton as her new boyfriend? Will she use Clayton in ways similar to that of what Sophie did to Theo? I have no idea. Andrea seems very mysterious, despite the little bio about her.
I'm still waiting for Olivia to have some fun with a tiny. So far she has been cruel in hurting them, and using her actions to gain information and control. She doesn't want Elliot to run off, right? Well, she should put him inside her panties, or tie him up somewhere. No need to break his whole foot. Lol. I think she needs a snickers bar. "You're not you when your hungry."
When did Ted become a big macho dude? I thought he was average build, and was never that intimidating. In most giantess stories, the big, muscular dude always gets shrunk. .......Wait a minute!......Olivia is going to 'show' Ted her experiment, and shrink him! She doesn't want people to know about her involvement with the dissapearances of all these people, so she shrinks those who have a trace! I think I got it!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Don't worry, things are starting to heat up
Date: August 01 2015 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey there !
This story is one of my favourite one from this website.
I always loved it when the main character got more than he bargained for. And it's happening with Sophie, in a way that I really, really do like. She's thinking about her pleasure, and cares less and less about her ex boyfriend. That's amazing. Keep it going, I just can't wait to see what happens next. The more cruel she gets, the better :D
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to share a review. One theme that us recurrent through many stories is the inversion of power and in this one as Theo has 'awakened' Sophie the roles are reversing. There was a lot of lead up but now it's getting interesting
[Report This]Date: July 29 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
Another great Chapter :) I really enjoyed reading you work.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to write a review. Hopefully I can keep your interest up in the chapters to come.
[Report This]Date: July 29 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
This is really, really good.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback and for writing a review. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
[Report This]Date: July 29 2015 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
Olivia using her charms to get more men. Next up, Wiley. Soon, she is going to shrink him, and use, and use him, and I cant wait!
Wrapping him around her little finger. Well that sounds sexy.
I still cant believe Clayton pulled that shit off. Thats incredible!
What Sophie is doing to Theo is by far one of the best tactics I have seen in a giantess story! If I had a giantess girlfriend, Sophie is definately my pick. Constant sex, and riding in her panties. Thats the dream....yup.
In addition, it just seems much more satisfying to see Theo resist Sophie. I always liked the scene of someone being trapped in a giantess's panties. If Theo enjoyed it, then it wouldnt exactly be a trap, it would be more like heaven. Thats how I would see it if I was in his position.
Well, now since Theo has escaped, I guess that cant happen. :( I guess Theo couldnt handle it. Now he must find his saving 'Grace'.
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
We'll see how far Sophie goes now that she's coming out of her shell. Sorry Theo...
Date: July 23 2015 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
The way you tell your stories is something else. I actually read these more or less for the good writing just as much as the content right now
Honestly, I hope you continue all of these till full completion myself. I'll comment more as I read more though!
Good luck man
Author's Response:
Thanks alot for the props, it's always gratifying to hear someone has found something of merit in the stories I share. Thanks again, :)
[Report This]Date: July 23 2015 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
"All I ever wanted was the truth."
Lol! I wonder just how many, besides me, instantly pictured Jack Nicholson yelling: "YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE TRUTH!"
Author's Response:
Haha it's what I was thinking while I was writing it - "You just fucked with the wrong marine!"
[Report This]Date: July 22 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow!
Olivia murdered Hans! There no turning back now! She's straight up evil and Clayton knows it!
Elliot is now the only alive man stuck in Olivia's drawer. She better use them before they all die or escape.
Clayton is a genius. He is the Tess in Tom's story, and the Dustin in the Double Dare story. I love people who use their wits!
Clayton used matches to cause a fire. I thought he was gonna burn everything down and try to get revenge. But he was smarter than that. He tried to smoke the place out forcing Olivia to open up his only escape. And the best part is......Olivia has no freaking idea how much she just got outplayed by someone just a few inches tall!
Clayton also then walked into Olivia's neighbor's place. The owner was a woman, so things could get interesting. Now the question is whether Clayton will talk to this new owner, or will he hide and hope for the best?
Sophie is now obsessed with power. Only sexual power, and only power in this relationship. Theo now has no say whatsoever anymore. I like it. And Grace doesn't notice it. She thinks that Theo agreed to do Sophie a favor.
I wonder if Theo will escape to Grace or even Hannah. Could be a possibly.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Olivia has cetainly cast herself as a vindictive kind of woman. Hmm clayton, out of hte frying pan into the fire, who knows? :) Sophie is waking up!
Date: July 17 2015 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
"He's always pinching my cheek. I hate that!"
;P
Author's Response:
Lol
[Report This]Date: July 16 2015 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
One thing that I love about this story is how different it is compared to your other works.
All that magic from that group of women used in your other stories just seem so complicated, especially when there are so many characters.
This story is more simple, and I am kinda liking it. It feels.....fresh. I doesn't involve that magical shrink but instead a tech that shrinks people.
Also, I love how this story centers on the same group of characters. I remember in the contract, when it was just Jack, Angeline, and Clarice. Those first 2 chapters are still the best in my opinion. In this story, this chapter has been the best in my opinion.
Here Sophie finally did something that she wanted while Theo was reluctant to do what she asked, yet she forced him to do it. I love characters that are all sweet, and then have a kinky side to them. I guess it's becuase that's my dream giantesd girlfriend. One who is caring, and has a sexy side to her. That's what Sophie has and I wish more authors have characters like her. (Selene also as that same personality).
If you were to write another story,(this is kind of a request) I would like to see you write about a rich teenage kid who shrinks himself with a machine and stalks a female classmate and clings with her as she goes home one day. However, the girl notices him and becomes cruel to him and hides him from her parents. One day, he escapes her room, but the girl's mother finds him and decides to care for him, but also has sexy ideas similar to Sophie. Then the story goes one about the boy dealing with the girl and the mom. The mom is sexy and gentle, and the girl is cruel and sexy. That is my dream story, and I know there have been stories that match my dream, but your writing exceeds them. You don't have to do it, but if you do, I will be very thankful.
In addition to Sophie's wonderful attitude, I loved how she wanted Theo in the front of her panties, my favorite spot to see a giantess place her tiny man!
This story is getting better and better!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom, I am always receptive to feedback to help me refine my storytelling chops. I'll see what I can do for your request, putting my own spin on it, :)
Date: July 16 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Then, yeah; he's definitely one of those Old School guys. :-(
Author's Response:
Lol, as per many of the masculine characters in my stories who erroneously believe they are in a position of stength until they realize, too late, the self conceived perception of control is subjective and illusory.
What does this say about my pysche i wonder? :O
Date: July 16 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
Gary Elwes: better known as Wesley (alias Dread Pirate Roberts IV) in THE PRINCESS BRIDE.
Author's Response:
Cary :P, "We shall fight to the pain."
[Report This]Date: July 16 2015 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
I know Ted is just being a worried father, from his point of view. But, even so, part of the way he gripped Sophie's arm gives me the impression that he might be one of those Old School guys. The kind who thinks his children automatically owe him their life-long respect just from having been conceived...and that the word "obey" should never have been removed from a woman's wedding vows.
Author's Response:
Ted is used to people deferring to him and doesn't like to give up control easily. Might be a recipe for trouble a little later
[Report This]Date: July 16 2015 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
That goes double for True Love. Just ask Gary Elwes!
Author's Response:
Gary or Cary? (The Crush)