[Report This]Date: December 16 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 22
Man, forget Oliva and Clayton. That Hannah and Tom scene was fantastic!
My favorite part was this descriptive phrase where you said she pushed him until her 3rd knuckle or something was left visible. That gave me a really good picture of what was going on.
Theo is now playing along, but will he start enjoying it and teasing these girls like the "old" Tom in Tom's story? I always found it more exciting when the little guy was fearful of her pussy. Them changed right when I didn't want it to.
Still, very good chapter.
I can't wait for the next one!
[Report This]Date: December 16 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 22
Trust, my dear Dr. Elliot, is like true respect. It has to be earned _before_ it's given. What most people mean, when asking someone to "trust" them, is actually a request for blind faith. And that only grows into trust if the faith offered is justified rather than betrayed.
Ergo, you'll have to have _faith_ that Olivia will keep her word. Only then, will you know for certain whether she's truly trustworthy. And thus, In the immortal words of Sean Connery (from THE UNTOUCHABLES):
"Here endeth the lesson."
[Report This]Date: December 16 2015 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
Nice to see Theo is finally wising up, and starting to play the game, maybe he will survive for a bit. Also hoping that one of the men gets stockholm syndrome, and wants to stay small (thinking Clayton).