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Reviewer: DARK WRITTER Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2015 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 20

Hopefully Theo has a new and very permanent home in the golden-brown eye of the hurricane!!!  Who knows, there could be a strange side effect of the shrinking process that makes breathing in Hannah's {or any woman's; but definitely Hannah and Olivia's} derierre air life stustaining for tinies.

Maybe he'll even come to find he likes the sense of stability and security up in there so much he'll ask Hannah if he can stay.  His dad could pay him an occasional visit and tell him what a beautiful choice of home he's made.

At the very least Theo should stay for Hannah's jog.

Knew he'd loose the bet!  Nice work as usual.



Author's Response:

Lol the hurricane is force of nature and Theo is completely at her mercy. This story is another that moved in a direction I hadn't anticipated eg Wiley and one which I'll be bringing to a close in the next few chapters.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 20

Like I said, earlier: RIP, Theo. :-(

Author's Response:

He will never ever be the same but honestly speaking if it were one of us I think it would create a healthy and wary respect for feminine wiles.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 20

I hope that was just a tease! I think Hannah is just getting started.

(You said he was turned on when "she was not even dressed". I think you meant she was dressed.)

Part 2 please next!

Sexy erotic chapter. Good descriptions.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

The hurricane has made landfall let's see where it takes little Theo 

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