[Report This]Date: August 14 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Terrific so far. Really starting to come along.
How about the machine being able to shrink people to different sizes; such as Olivia mentioning the different size capabilities and Andrea asking for Bryce to be shrunk down to an inch.
Could you add some long term panty / thong wear, with a tiny in the front or back {both}
Perhaps Hannah gets addicted to using inch or two inch guys as perminant suppositories {perhaps the machine can be calibrated for a particular woman's genetic make-up, so they can live and get stuck up her hiney living off of her poop and breathing in her farts forever}
I'm not sure what Olivia plans on doing with Elliot or how she's going to punish Clayton; maybe she can stuff each one underneath her breasts {like living underwires} and decide to keep each one under their particular breast to drink her sweat and eat dead skin. Of course they'd have to come out to go to the bathroom or for her to change their mini-diapers; but then right back under her breasts they go. I don't know if you said Olivia's breast size; but for this Double EE would be a nice crushing weight to keep them both securely in place even without a bra.
Keep up the great work!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Dark Writter for taking the time to read this story and provide a review, you've provided some excellent ideas to incorporate into this story to keep it moving forward. I hope you continue to enjoy
[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
Of course Olivia has yoga pants. Is she going to get Wiley along the way?
At this point, there is going to be a lot of tiny men in this story. First, Theo, then the doctor whom Olivia killed. Then Clayton, then Ted. Soon Bryce and soon Wiley. That's 5 guys for 3 ladies. Actually, I forgot about Grace.
Let's play match ups:
Sophie-Ted
Grace-Theo
Olivia-Clayton and Wiley
Andrea-Bryce
So now this device will be portable. Will there be a lot more toys, or was it made portable just to shrink Bryce?
I hope there won't be too many tinies. Then it will be hard to track who is who and the main characters won't have their fun together.
After the exchange of Ted, I'm curious what is going to happen next. Everyone who can stop them is shrunk and now at their mercy. I don't think there is anything left for these women to do except to play with their men.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Around and around she goes, where she stops, no one will know, well, except me I guess, ;)
[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Whoa: deja vu!