One thing that I love about this story is how different it is compared to your other works.

All that magic from that group of women used in your other stories just seem so complicated, especially when there are so many characters.

This story is more simple, and I am kinda liking it. It feels.....fresh. I doesn't involve that magical shrink but instead a tech that shrinks people.

Also, I love how this story centers on the same group of characters. I remember in the contract, when it was just Jack, Angeline, and Clarice. Those first 2 chapters are still the best in my opinion. In this story, this chapter has been the best in my opinion.

Here Sophie finally did something that she wanted while Theo was reluctant to do what she asked, yet she forced him to do it. I love characters that are all sweet, and then have a kinky side to them. I guess it's becuase that's my dream giantesd girlfriend. One who is caring, and has a sexy side to her. That's what Sophie has and I wish more authors have characters like her. (Selene also as that same personality).

If you were to write another story,(this is kind of a request) I would like to see you write about a rich teenage kid who shrinks himself with a machine and stalks a female classmate and clings with her as she goes home one day. However, the girl notices him and becomes cruel to him and hides him from her parents. One day, he escapes her room, but the girl's mother finds him and decides to care for him, but also has sexy ideas similar to Sophie. Then the story goes one about the boy dealing with the girl and the mom. The mom is sexy and gentle, and the girl is cruel and sexy. That is my dream story, and I know there have been stories that match my dream, but your writing exceeds them. You don't have to do it, but if you do, I will be very thankful.

In addition to Sophie's wonderful attitude, I loved how she wanted Theo in the front of her panties, my favorite spot to see a giantess place her tiny man!

This story is getting better and better!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom, I am always receptive to feedback to help me refine my storytelling chops. I'll see what I can do for your request, putting my own spin on it, :)

I know Ted is just being a worried father, from his point of view. But, even so, part of the way he gripped Sophie's arm gives me the impression that he might be one of those Old School guys. The kind who thinks his children automatically owe him their life-long respect just from having been conceived...and that the word "obey" should never have been removed from a woman's wedding vows.

Author's Response:

Ted is used to people deferring to him and doesn't like to give up control easily. Might be a recipe for trouble a little later