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Reviewer: burrito Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 29 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 4

This is really, really good.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback and for writing  a review. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

For Theo's sake, I hope the GCR imparted some kind of latent accelerated healing factor. Similar to that depicted in the HIGHLANDER films and TV series! Although, for Theo's sake, hopefully activated by intense pain rather than violent death.

Author's Response:

Hmm... some type of hyper resiliency? I think Theo might have some explaining to do and earlier in the story there was some turbulent feelings between Sophie and him over Hannah

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 4

That scene with Hannah was creative. I mean, wanting a tiny person to feel your sensitive skin, and then claiming that it felt good, is a great way to start something special. (I'm tempted to try that too. Haha.)

Sophie will probably ask Hannah if she has seen Theo, and Hannah will reply "nah, but I had a dream about him" or something like that. Perhaps Sophie should introduce Hannah to the new Theo so she doesn't mistaken him again.

Now Dr. Featherstone has 2 tinies. I wonder if there will be some "distractions" during her work.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom, we shall see how the situation unfolds between Hannah and her roomies and Dr. Featherstone and her tiny guests.

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