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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2015 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm starting to like Dr. Featherstone. A beautiful, yet independent woman.

Is Hans the same guy as Dr. Brauer?

Sophie and Theo are having fun, and it was sooner than I expected.

Grace gave a hint of her seduction by referring to her nightie to Clayton. I really hope Hannah returns soon. I want to see her reaction to these tinies.

With this pace in the story, it looks like Sophie plays with Theo, Grace plays with Clayton, and Dr. Featherstone plays with Dr. Brauer.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hopefully you enjoy the next chapter, not quite as you envisioned, but we'll see where it goes...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

I think you meant to say "...would be suspicious." But, you probably confused it with "...wouldn't be inconspicuous."

Author's Response:

I meant suspicious, more the facetious connotation. Perhaps i should have clarified some. :)

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