Date: March 28 2020 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is amazinggg , I'd be very happy to see more!
I think this is the best one to develop more chapters and maybe you can make other stories based on it. Please consider releasing more
Date: November 19 2015 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is awesome keep it up
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. As I indicated in a few of my other review, i have been considering bringing this story to an end using the proposal as a means of taking these characters in a new direction, but honestly not so sure.
Date: October 24 2015 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Forgot to mention her so called "dance". She said she would give him a little dance. Theo is probably not even expecting much as she says this.
I bet Hannah is going to give some strip tease lap dance that is so exotic that Theo gets an enormous effect that he tried to hide it.
Just another reason why Theo is not going to watch any movies with Hannah.
Author's Response:
Theo may be a little out of his league with the full force of the hurricane focused soely on him...
Date: September 01 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Dark Writer's ideas are fantastic! I never even thought of Ted's wife coming along. I love the idea of having her take Ted home in her panties. That's a great idea.
If anyone is going to do the butt insertion, I bet it's either Sophie or Hannah. It would be interesting if Olivia puts Clayton in her pussy and Wiley in her butt. Sophie should teach her.
Author's Response:
Hmm we'll see Tom m'boy where this little flight of fancy takes us. Thanks for all your continued support across the vast number of stories I have in the go it is always nice to know someone out there is enjoying it :)
Date: August 01 2015 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey there !
This story is one of my favourite one from this website.
I always loved it when the main character got more than he bargained for. And it's happening with Sophie, in a way that I really, really do like. She's thinking about her pleasure, and cares less and less about her ex boyfriend. That's amazing. Keep it going, I just can't wait to see what happens next. The more cruel she gets, the better :D
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to share a review. One theme that us recurrent through many stories is the inversion of power and in this one as Theo has 'awakened' Sophie the roles are reversing. There was a lot of lead up but now it's getting interesting
Date: July 23 2015 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
The way you tell your stories is something else. I actually read these more or less for the good writing just as much as the content right now
Honestly, I hope you continue all of these till full completion myself. I'll comment more as I read more though!
Good luck man
Author's Response:
Thanks alot for the props, it's always gratifying to hear someone has found something of merit in the stories I share. Thanks again, :)
Date: July 17 2015 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
"He's always pinching my cheek. I hate that!"
;P
Author's Response:
Lol
[Report This]Date: June 22 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
"and they all fall down". (and shrink).
This story is refreshing and seems more playful compared to your other stories.
I think Sophie is an interesting character becuase of her rapid change in her emotions.
Theo seems like that guy that you just wanna knock out. I mean, he keeps messing things up and he doesnt care. However Sophie cares and she would be angry at Theo when she finds him.
Hannah and Grace are cool too. Lookin forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hey Tom, yeah a little less supernatural this time around. I contemplated linking this story to the others by having Charlotte (with Oleg perhaps) move into the house as this is the university she's going to, but decided against it, well at least for now. :)
Date: June 21 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start my friend can't wait for the next chapter! You should consider adding a bio page maybe with pics of celebs as references for the characters looks. I feel that always helps me get into a story more
Author's Response:
Thanks for the idea KushKing, I'll consider it. Hope you continue to enjoy thestory as it unfolds.
[Report This]Date: June 21 2015 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
So much for German efficiency!
Author's Response:
We shall see if the teutonic Dr. Brauer has the wherewithal to remedy the situation using German ingenuity. Hmm