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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2015 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 19

I hope my review wasn't too critical. Although it was a crazy chapter, I did enjoy it.

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Date: July 07 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 19

This chapter was weird/crazy, you name it. I did not expect it.

First, you gave us a warning which, in my opinion wasn't even needed becuase what Trinity and Elizabeth did seemed far worse.

The Caleb part felt like a tease, and I didn't really feel his presence, and since I'm not much of a M/m fan, it's alright for me.

What is GT material? Am I the only one who doesn't know this?

Caleb is oblivious as a elephant is to an ant.

Hmmm. I still wonder why Caleb dumped Trinity. If he is horny, and if she is horny, I thought they are a perfect match. I guess not.

The part where Trinity and Scott were becoming nice, would've been a good ending if they became boyfriend/girlfriend.

Ending scene at Maeghan's house seems suspicious. Very dream worthy. Looking up at all these girls that abused you and reliving the pain as you experience flashes of each one chasing you. Then Trinity swallows him. Yep, sounds like a nightmare to me.

The reason I say nightmare, is becuase Haleigh is not there. If she were there, this scene could've been a summary of this story, but since it's all the girls that humiliated him, I believe that it's a nightmare.

Great stuff! I can't wait to see the deleted scenes!

Author's Response:

GT is male giants.

 

I put the warning in either way, and I actually ended up not writing as much about Caleb as I thought.

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2015 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 19

And suddenly he woke up and it was all... real, and he is about to die.

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