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Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 2

Add booty and this story will be perfect!!!

Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

I hope this story really uses the tags it was tagged for, because they sounds promising, especially the unaware, insertion, butt and vore. I dont really know how you will use them all though for one micro character. Sadly it happens a lot here that the author chooses as much tags as possible and then what comes? A 300 words "story".



Author's Response:

I added the tags based on what I have planned for the other girls This story is going to be roughly 20 chapters in length by the time it's finished.

Thanks for the input!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2015 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

It's a great story so far. Don't really have much to say. Besides that it W's really good.

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