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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm almost tempted to say something like: "They're now riding her menstrual cycle." But, that would be stooping too low, even for me.

So I won't. ;-)

Author's Response:

I actually thought about how a period might maybe her uber cranky but, right now she seems to be having fun.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2015 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

So Charlotte is living with her sister and parents. That could be interesting in the future. We met Virginia, a taller, but younger version of Charlotte. Now we need to meet the parents.(maybe not the dad, just her mom.)

Zara is a horny assassin. She toys, shrinks, and swallow people for pleasure. And Lori has a front row seat! What a show for her...possibly the best horror movie in her life! Haha.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Going to exploring the dynamic between Lori and Zara, 'but wait there's more!'

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