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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2015 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

The puzzles pieces are forming a picture. They way you upload both stories seem to be in chronological order. So all the chapters from both stories seem to go in order. This chapter right here continues from both 'the contract and the book.'

So there's the girl that shrunk Oleg, the giantess from the cave, and now Abigail with some strange power in her genes. I feel like a tiny girl will randomly show up soon. While old parts are linked together, new things are forming.

Can Sebastian be trusted? He is the first guy to be shrunk and not get captured.

I'm still interested to see the Charlotte/Oleg relationship. But that can wait. This chapter is important as it links both stories.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm hoping to keep enough original content to keep the stories separate but ceertainly working parallel to one another. Thanks for the feedback

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

The three disparate plot threads begin to interweave.*

*Sorry! I was force-fed a lot of big words in Eng. Lit. 101...and I still regurgitate some of them every so often.

Author's Response:

Trying to thread this story logically while keeping it from getting to muddle or intertwined with The contract.

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