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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am really liking this new character of Charlotte. She is very likable and you feel for her after losing a relationship.

Lucky Oleg. First Zara, now Charlotte.

Zara has the force. Thats what all these women remind me of; the jedi from star wars. I know its random, but when people can sense others' presence, and use an ability to control another person, I found it kinda similar. Also their bodies are more enhanced and resistant to drugs and external forces.

The 2 guys died, but Lori lives. First woman that Zara has captured. Could be interesting in the future.

Not much else to say becuase it was clear and made sense.

Im really, really interested im that Charlotte, Oleg relationship. Hopefully, it lasts a long time.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2015 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

She may have the mind of a terrible two year-old. But, with the body of a supermodel, it shouldn't take too long for Zara to have some lecherous male motorist offering her a lift.

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