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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 2

Mysteriouser and mysteriouser!*

I can't wait to see if this will tie in/circle back to the first story. :-)


*With apologies to Lewis Carroll.

Author's Response:

Hi Carycomic, this story is a spin off of the Contract. There may be some cross over, as well there will be an appearance from a character from my other story the Ad. FYI

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 2

What the.......!

I never knew the contract could have such a deep background!

I have barely any idea who any of these people are, but some are vanishing so they must be related to the contract, otherwise, its difficult to connect the dots.

Is she the book? A spirit of the book? To be honest, I thought she was a hologram. I was wrong, big time. Arthur created a person, with magic!

Isnt it ironic that usually sex is reauired to make a baby, but in this case, a person is brought into this world (a baby) and that person has sex with the creator and kills it? Amazing.

So people were vanishing before this incident. I thought she was the first giantess to start shrinking people and all the stuff in the contract happened later. I guess not. People were already shrinking.

So can this new girl change sizes, or did she shrunk Arthur? She was 130 ft tall (to arthur), but a small girl to Oleg. I think she shrunk him, like all the other women who have the stone's power.

"strange yellow eyes, naked girl with no identity". Strangest thing Sebastian heard all day.

Now this girl is a threat. (she kinda is one). Even though these tough guys like Oleg think shes weak, think again!

Danger is present, but also hidden in plain sight.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey Tom, this story takes place on the heels of chapter 17 of the Contract. Same folks that appeared in the hunt used to be here. The Book is a key that opened a pathway from our world to Zara's, for a period of time, the two co-existed in the same space, that's where giant Zara met Arthur. When the deal was finalized with Arthur's passing, the portal closed, pulling Zara from her world into ours and in so doing she was reduced to human sized. she seems innocent and unaware because it has been a long time since she was here last, but she is FAR from it. Contract happened first (and is still happening), this is a thread from that story. I am unsure yet whether or not I will have her as a true giantess, or keep her as is, we'll see. Yellow eyes are to link her to Hilde, Zara and Hilde come from the same background, that will be revealed in yet another story i'm working on. Hope that helps clear up some of the confusion. As always, thank you for your feedback, it is invaluable and helps me see things I've missed. Enjoy!

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