Date: January 26 2016 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hoping to see an update but that probably won't happen.
Author's Response:
I want to tear this one apart and put it back together. I'm about halfway to where I want it, but I keep coming up with other stuff. Proably wont be for a while though... :(
Date: June 13 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I started reading the contract and loved it, but I am one of those guys that hardly ever finishes reading a story, or finish writing one fot that matter. After reading this i need to make it a priority to go back and finish the contract.
I too am eager to see what happened to Oleg, and am hoping he survives. I like him as a character. He seems to be a generally good guy, the way he tried to help Zara, and you do a good job writing him. I hope we see him and Zara together again.
You're stories are great, keep up the good work buddy.
[Report This]Date: June 12 2015 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Why do I have the feeling that Vivienne is a Mata Hari for Hilde and Company?
But, even if I'm wrong, this is a very suspenseful start to your parent story. :-)
Author's Response:
I seriously considered making Vivienne one of the women with the power to shrink. I haven't ruled it out,maybe she set Arthur up to bring Zara through. I guess time will tell. :)