Reviews For Omega: Touch
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Reviewer: MikeQ24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2016 8:06 PM Title: Way

"You can relax.  She’s the goodie-two-shoes,” the Alpha said, feigning trying to keep Bridget from hearing, and only giggled as the Omega’s thumb gave her a playful jab in the shoulder before proceeding to tickle the smaller girl’s stomach without mercy.  “Except to me.  She’s a freaking huge jerk to me.”

“Nonsense.  I’m a perfect angel,” Bridget snickered dryly.

And this went from being fun and enjoyable to being harsher in hindsight. Still a good story, though.

Just out of curiosity, did you get my PM? I wasn't sure if it actually went through or not.

 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the story. I haven't had any new messages come in recently, though.

Reviewer: Orpheus Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2015 2:34 PM Title: Way

An adorable ending. However, I was somewhat disappointed that there wasn't as much actual hand interaction as I was expecting, given the set up and the title. It's certainly an aspect about this fetish I love, and what you did end up putting in was very enjoyable. Hopefully, this lovely pair will have more appearances in the future. 

Nonetheless, another great piece once again.



Author's Response:

Fair. As I wrote, the story shifted from the hand focus I originally had into one about this act Lucy is going through for her friend. Glad to hear you still enjoyed it; as always, I appreciate your commentary.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2015 4:59 PM Title: Way

This was a really good short story. You have to bring these characters back! I just feel connect to them like the other characters in the Omega series. Can't wait for the next story.

Thanks Jack:)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I do enjoy writing the characters, so if I find a good way, I'll bring them back. Look forward to hearing your comments as always.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2015 7:42 AM Title: Way

Damn, great stuff



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2015 7:32 AM Title: Way

Is this Bridget and Alexandra before or after "Inheritance"?

 



Author's Response:

This is 3 years before Inheritance.

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