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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 24: A Mistress in Blue, Chapter 5

That's hot!

Anthony about to be locked up into heaven.

Heather made this chapter awesome. Not becuase of what she was don't about her body, but about what she was telling Anthony while he was shrinking. It felt epic, like his destiny.

Instead of tasting Anthony at half size, they should sit on him and pin him down. I could see Anthony sitting on a tiny chair, and then Heather sits on Anthony's lap, her ass grinding on his crotch. (She has clothes on).

While I'm anxious for Anthony to shrink, I would love to see a foreplay chapter, if possible. They could wrestle, get in see positions for practice, or Heather could simply wrap her legs around Anthony to tease him.

What happened to that tiny girl? Isn't she still there? Also, could Anthony ride in those panties like the little girl. (I forgot her name.) Except, Anthony should be tied to the front of her panties while her pussy interrogates him.

So many ideas as Anthony is shrinking. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

It was all Heather could do to stay clear-headed enough to say those things to Anthony! She has needs too...

Sorry to say that Anthony will open the next chapter already shrunk. But there will be many hot and playful moments with Heather. 

I think Anthony will not only get a ride, he will get to meet Candy, the "girl" who is actually a former detective who got shrunk. She's probably around 30 and wishing she was big so she could be a MILF goddess too. 

Stick around for more! 

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