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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2017 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 16: Your Perfect Imperfections

Even though it's a short chapter, I like the frequent updates recently. I also, enjoyed how creative this chapter is. You took an article and made it fit into the style of this story.

I found the quotes funny, becuase it sounds almost silly reading quotes about guys loving stuff that most people see as a flaw.

I'm curious about the mention of stretch marks and cellulite. Is this just the article saying this, or is this a thing that's going to appear in the rest of the story. To me stretch marks are not bad, but cellulite, especially if it stands out is sort of a turn off. It makes me wonder if we had the goddess to love change my mind, and soon I would love it.

The survey was interesting becuase it focused on parts that I never thought about. Also, the wider hips is the only part that I actually enjoy on that list. I was looking for a sulty voice option, more experience, care like a mother unlike a bratty teen, and maybe even a little taller option since some women still grow and look taller as they age.

I hope these imperfections don't include pimples or warts. That's a no-no for me,haha. If these guys started worshiping that, I would start laughing.

I like that quote about going through puberty again. The goddess of love changes the sexual thoughts in each male and there is a new lust for older women just as there was a lust for younger women before.

Lastly, I like the use of the blogger, Sean X who was inspiring other tinies to embrace their new life and how they should be drawn to these elder, mature sexy women. He also mentioned 2 other attributes that mature women have: power and confidence. The older women are already ahead in life and have some social standing to make them a powerful and worthy person to the community. Also, their confidence is provided with their experience and with more years under their belt, they know how to handle young men unlike younger women.

Good stuff, and interesting way to describe this world with this creative article.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

As always, I appreciate your input, TS. I like to write these "article" chapters when time or writer's block keeps me from developing a traditional chapter. 


A deep, sultry voice is something I would have mentioned if I rewrote the chapter from scratch. This chapter ended up being about younger men being drawn to visual attributes. Part of the Goddess' mission is to make older women more attractive so they don't have to be alone. She thinks that a woman should be most attractive when she reaches her sexual peak and has experience to go with it. So she's altering some things on the woman's side (making already wide bottoms perkier and more prominent, creating a second womb to drive reproductive aspects to pass along the trait) and altering some of the ways younger men perceive older women. 


I don't think I'll spend a lot of time describing cellulite on MILFs but I wanted to put out the idea of young men being attracted to things that signal age and experience in a woman. There is a slight increase in body hair past 35 as women reach perimenopause, which most women fight. This is due to a change in hormones with estrogen decreasing and testosterone becoming more prominent by comparison. In a world where there is evolutionary reason to leverage the back-fertility of older women, that would be a signal to young men about to shrink that this is a mature woman. 

I think Jason in this "article" is an example of one type of young man who gets shrunk. To one extent or another all, to complete the transition to smallness, men who shrink must become emotionally small. One way to become emotionally small is to shed the emotional mask worn by many men and to become playful. These men want a sexual partner, but they also need someone who can be somewhat maternal toward them. Often a mature woman must take matters into their own hands and shrink them, because they don't realize their own needs. One such character is the man shrunk by Amber's mom in "A World of Breasts and Buttocks." 

Another type of shrunken young man I'll call the "explorer." When he shrinks, he sees women's bodies as great challenges, the way a man might view hiking in the mountains in a storm. This type of young man feels more confident with the storminess of younger women, and is more attracted to them than older women. He becomes emotionally small by experiencing their bodies and emotions the way one would experience nature. 

I continue to bounce story ideas around in my head. I'm still thinking about the policewomen and their "explorer' program for small young men. Thanks for your continuing support!

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