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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 15: Figuring it Out

Interesting to have this educated tiny go into this world and try to get his career started amongst these females.

One thing I didn't fancy was how Nick got handed to Debrorah like it was an arranged marriage. I prefer the wild chase that these women had on tinies. The constant fear of a tiny getting captured is entertaining to read, but that's just me. To be fair, I guess this would be common in such a chaotic state for parents trying to find the perfect woman for their sons.

I loved the presentation scene! The questions and the way they giggled, made me excited! I wished we could have heard the other women ask him naughty questions too. In today's society, if the genders were flipped, that would be sexual harassment, but in this story, it's sexy. Kinda dissapointed that Deborah had to end the fun.

Cool perspective this time. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I can't tell you how much I appreciate your dedicated fandom and input, Tom. 

Maybe some version of the Boycatching for mature women would have worked. But remember they are more mature, a bit slower, especially in heels, and might like something a lot more discreet. 

Remember that Nick asked Mom for help meeting older women, at some point after being disenchanted with the girls in the Boycatching. His mother THEN set up the circumstances that led to meeting Deborah. From Nick's description, it's clear he doesn't feel Deborah was forced upon him. 

I kind of wrote Nick's inner mind thinking how every generation gets tired of the ones before talking about how things were better in the good old days. Nick's no doubt tired of hearing men who remember the world before the Rebalancing of Sexes talk about how things were better when men were big. He doesn't have to get into fights or other dude things to prove his manhood or demonstrate it to females, and he gets (and all men get) a level of attention previously reserved for athletes, movie stars and the likes of Justin Bieber. 

I came up with the idea of older women - younger men when I was trying to create an evolutionary justification for women having two vaginas. Of course I wanted the second vagina so tiny men could still have a place to dip their wicks, as it were. But it needs to have a reproductive purpose to be inherited. So I thought up the idea of a second womb. It would make sense for boys to be born from the back because if they were bornsmall, they could enter the world from that small an opening. Then I decided the second womb should have a diffferent fertile time than the first, to give older women greater sexual value by adding reproductive value. I decided they should birth the tinier sex later because, presumably, raising a two-inch tall boy would be easier than raising a girl to five feet and change. They should have their daughters young, when they have the stamina to keep up.

I did enjoy writing the presentation scene. These women now have all the power, but their desires are driving them so crazy, as men's did when they were the bigger sex, but in such a girly way. I could have let that scene go on forever, but then what a mess to clean up in a single chapter!

Nick's inability to compare his world to some yardstick that's ten times taller than he is is perhaps his most appealing trait. To him, women's lips have always been as big as a torso, women's hair has always been a thicket, women's breasts have always been soft hills to climb on, women's vaginas have always been warm, wet caves, daring him with danger and delight, women's bottoms have always been towering walls of softness, power, and protection, and a pair of panties has always been roof, floor, hammock and home. Love and lust has always been ample in his life and while he doesn't know a lot about the old world, he knows that wasn't always true for men. He is on track to do well in this world of towering women no matter what. 

Thanks again for your support, Tom!

 

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