Reviews For Apple of Her Eye
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: sarashrunk Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 28 2015 4:22 PM Title: Tongue Dive

Very good tale.

After all, like Sarah, Ivy and Rachel will come with small Kal??

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2015 1:03 AM Title: Tongue Dive

This chapter was refreshing. Glad we returned to this relationship.

Kale seems to have stopped talking.....almost as if he is just a doll to Anna.

Submarine fun? Hmm. That actually sounds like fun. He can dive among the other girls and between their limbs.

I'm interested in a Cherry visit. This chapter was cold. Things could be spiced up a bit. I can't wait for the next chapter!

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.