Reviews For Apple of Her Eye
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Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2015 6:37 AM Title: What Awaits Within?

While I'm glad that Kal's opinion wasn't even solicited for this encounter, I did miss hearing his tiny voice being suddenly muffled as his face crossed the threshold.  That's always an auditory money shot for me.



Author's Response:

Shame the little guy can't make a peep.  They are probably better off that way.  Never was one for last minute screams, just a nice wiggling toy slowly disappearing under the weight of a finger.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2015 11:03 PM Title: What Awaits Within?

Playful, mysterious, yet seductive.

Why cant all giantess' have a similar personality? I would love to see Anna act like this the whole story.

She gives riddles, analogies, references, which make it more fun to read.

Hmm. I guess Anna is starting to like this idea of a shrunken boyfriend and is now at the next level and probably has exceeded even Kal's expectations.

I think the turning point in this story is when Anna said that Kal didnt have much of a choice. She is not asking Kal for permission to use him, instead she is using him regardless of what he is saying.

I cant wait for the playful yet sadistic side of Anna. (after all it was Kal's idea to enjoy it and this is waht anna is doing.)

Ending of this chapter was a good cliffhanger. Something about a dildo for later use.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it.  Hopefully you won't be left hanging too much longer!  

Besides it's probably getting tight for poor Kal.

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