[Report This]Date: May 17 2015 4:12 PM Title: Cloud Nine
I have a feeling that Ivy will steal Kal from Anna and live out her fantasies. I'm not sure if Kal will like it, but he might enjoy it at first.
I doubt that Ivy will post an ad for "shrunken to be men". It sounds a bit silly, but it could definitely happen.
Anna likes insertion, but they only had sex like once or twice, at most. Kal had more time with her bra than anything else. Looking to see things escalate in the coming chapters.
Date: May 17 2015 2:21 PM Title: Cloud Nine
That exchange between Anna and Ivy was very nice. It's one thing to share your desires with the person you hope will fulfill them, and it's another to share them with someone who will at best give you advice and at worst judge you for them. Add in the surreal novelty of shrinking people, and the conversation becomes much more fraught. I'm genuinely apprehensive to discover what Ivy has come up with.
On a much more banal note, it seems that Ch. 19 'Awaken' and Ch. 20 'Head in the Clouds' are identical. I do hope you didn't mistakenly overwrite a chapter.
Author's Response:
Indeed a small oversight, and I appreciate you pointing it out. Naturally, more is always on the way. The story may have some twists and turns yet.