Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 10:32 PM Title: I Hate Mushrooms

I have to admit, I've been refraining from posting any more reviews of this story because I was afraid I would jinx it.  My initial review was rather sarcastic; based on your other stories, I had expected Anna to very rapidly escalate from "You asked for this!" to "Now you're my butt plug--sucks to be you!"  Not that I have a problem with that; I wouldn't have read your other stuff if I did.  But I could not be more pleased that the pace and direction you have taken with the story has defied my expectations.

I love the slow "awakening" of desires and possibilities in Anna, and while it's great that Kal has given his enthusiastic consent (for everything so far), I'm glad that his voice and opinions are (literally) muted.  This is Anna's journey, and the liberation of desire is (for me) the whole point of being a giantess.  Rachel is clearly farther along the spectrum towards dominance, and Candy has a profit motive for encouraging Anna to regard Kal as property, but I like that Anna is taking things step by step and deciding what she really wants.  Once Anna has pushed her own boundaries futher, it would be interesting to hear what she might say to another "gi-curious" customer wandering the aisles, wondering just how gentle she would be with a tiny dude.

I was also very gratified by the "Knight's Quest" chapter, which I expect will have high replay value.  Not only was it a rare example of mutually-consensual vaginal insertion from a female perspective, the action and the imagery and the dialogue were all fresh and compelling.  I know how tough it is to work over the same familiar anatomy and try to find a new take that gets the juices flowing, and I admire how you've brought out the details of Anna's sensations and emotions.  I particularly cherish her attempt to describe to Rachel what it felt like to have Kal in her pussy.  I'm looking forward to board game night.  I wonder if Rachel has a boyfriend whom she might like Kal to "convert."

One part of my first review was sincere: I am insanely jealous of Kal, even if Anna eventually decides to rent him out to Rachel and friends for use as toilet paper.

Author's Response:

I have to admit, this review must have taken some serious forethought.  I appreciate such detailed and intellectual feedback.  Indeed, this is uncharted territory for me, but it's quite refreshing.  Not every giantess must be cruel, in fact most are probably not.  One dimensional characters and intense imagery are gratifying, but not sine qua non.  I fully intend to slowly immerse Anna in more colorful characters and circumstance, but something so new to her will take time to share, especially in open fashion.