Reviews For Apple of Her Eye
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Reviewer: burrito Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2015 10:58 AM Title: Please?

A terrific story with wonderful detail. I do hope you haven't stopped your updates. It would be a pleaure to hear more.

Reviewer: Lolwat111 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 10:11 AM Title: Please?

Hello,
First of all i would like to say nice writing skills.
I have read your bio on your gtsworld profile and you dear writer say you can accept requests,if i read it true?
Before i go on detail about my request. I would like to say that i gave you 10 for your writing skillz.

As for my request,can you consinder writing a new whole story from its start to end if possible.
My story details are about a cruel teenage girl soccer players enslaving a teenage boy at their sweaty,unwashed corn chips smelling like feet.Just writing the details made me a bit hot,dam.well basically i want a nasty smelly sweaty and what not feet oriented story that focuses on nasty teenage girls.I would be so damn glad if you could consinder my request as intriernet itself doesnt have stories,collages,videos etc.
Please consinder my idea,thank you.

Reviewer: JawnTrawn Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 2:15 AM Title: Please?

This is actually really great I eagerly wait for you to update more ;)

Reviewer: Laertiades Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2015 2:17 PM Title: Please?

Probably one of, if not the best story on here. That is all. Chapters 23 and 24 are incredible; Kal is a very lucky man!

Reviewer: Donnert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2015 11:18 AM Title: Please?

Great story! I can't wait to see where it goes!

Author's Response:

Always nice to hear a positive review.  I'll do my best to keep you reading.

Reviewer: mwakes28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 1:44 PM Title: Please?

One of my favorite stories! 5 out of 5 stars!

Reviewer: SoleEmbrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 1:25 PM Title: Please?

Wow! I love this story! I've always thought about how a regular person would make the transition to becoming a giantess, and your story was exactly what I was looking for! :) I liked how Anna wasn't sure how to approach her new role at first, but eventually got into it and found her place as a giantess. I liked her growth as Kal's partner, and really want to see where they're taking their relationship to!

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 10:06 AM Title: Please?

This is a wonderful story!  I love how you describe different things on the store.  Hopefully she experiments with several!  You have many interesting ideas, like the shower handle in the other story!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying the story thus far.  Never fear, I'm sure that the delights in Cherry will have the girls coming back for more.

Reviewer: rhino2003 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 5:34 AM Title: Please?

You have the perfect mix between fetish and storyline. I love the internal struggle that Anna is going thru, although it looks like the evil side is winning out. Are any of Anna's friends gonna have some GTS content? That might give the story a nice twist. But this story is amazing especially the panty entrapment, would love to see Kal spend an entire day in there. Yes and bring on the ass! Hopefully you keep this one going for a while.

Author's Response:

People are highly influenced by those around them.  They act one way, and then differently in another's prescence.  Most of us find a happy medium, and try to incorporate advice into what we think about ourselves.  Anna will have to find that balance for herself.

Reviewer: GalvanizedSpruce Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 3:35 AM Title: Please?

Your writing style is spectacular, and the content is even better. I love that you show the character development and bring some reality to the fantasy rather than just delving right into the smut.

That being said, I would love to see more mouth play and feet but mainly I just ask that you keep the story going! Thanks for a great read!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying the tales of Anna and Kal.  It's the kind words that keep the fuel burning late at night.  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2015 12:13 AM Title: Please?

Keep these babies coming... I'm still on edge for my giantess ass chapter lol!!

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2015 2:11 PM Title: Please?

Still no booty so far.. Lol I'm biting my nails haha

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2015 11:43 PM Title: Please?

Add ass please and lots of it. This is a 10!!

Author's Response:

Oy, oy!  I never add ass to my stories. Wink, wink, nudge, nudge.  I mean... uhh, no spoilers!

Reviewer: jkl1207 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2015 8:21 PM Title: Please?

Great read! Can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2015 3:03 PM Title: Please?

Well I love the dynamic and I look forward to seeing them explore their new roles.



Author's Response:

Things are just getting started.  Humans are silly, superstitious, and sexual.  Glad you are enjoying the read thus far.

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2015 3:00 PM Title: Please?

As a dude who hasn't had a lot of luck getting his female partners into size fantasy, I'm extremely envious of Kal.  I'm sure it'll be everything he's hoping for and no one will have any regrets.



Author's Response:

From personal experience, I can say that it only takes a little bit of work and understanding.  Luckily, I have found success in finding partners in life who enjoy the fantasy.  One delves into the reversal of traditional roles, with the powerful woman and helpless man.  I hope to show the full spectrum of what that relationship entails.

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